I need someone’s help with better sentences on Wikipedia. I want to simplify the sentences below contributed by someone (thanks!) on Wikipedia - mainboard section. The outcome in my mind for Wikipedia is like sentences in a scientific paper to simplify and clarify by cutting duplicated or decorated words, using active verbs rather than passive verbs. (E.g. Here are the tips. I am just learning it now.)
There does appear to be an issue with the first generation mainboard that requires complete removal and reconnection of both main battery and RTC cell, if the laptop is not charged for a relatively short period of time.
The sentences refer to http://community.frame.work/t/laptop-wont-power-on-unless-i-plug-in-ac-power/13085/61.
I don’t understand what the sentences mean. If it is about an abnormal or exceptional case that needs to replace the mainboard, I am still not sure how and where it is written on the Wikipedia page.
My draft:
A first generation mainboard may not power on without plugging AC power, as both the main battery and RTC cell have to reconnect wrongly if the laptop is not charged.
To clarify:
- Does this issue happen on every 1st generation Framework Laptop or a few?
- The “a relatively short period of time” => How long time? Where is the reference source?
- What is the real time clock cell?
@Jasn702 @Moe_Wigs Do you know any suggestions about this? I just found you guys on the thread. Thanks.